@Sandy - yeah this was just from jpegs and it didn't seem worth it to do much to this since it's high iso and pretty blurry in spots...

It looks much better here than in the forum post. What a heavy, brooding sky!
I'd like to see a little more with the foreground shadows - not to garish HDR levels but just a bit more detail.

Like the sharpness and how it recedes though simple out of focus to the great bokeh.

Super sharp thingummies!
Love the colours.

Well I guess they're all sharp, but the yellow one does it in two ways. Interesting how you've duplicated the rear bokeh pattern that Bill got with his alligator.

The yellow one bottom right is super sharp - it really pops.

Hope all turns out well. I agree with the comment about the lower part of the image. If you were to crop the top half out, keeping the width, it really makes it a very interesting "wide" image.

Hope the news turns around for you.
This is an interesting image. Didn't like it at first but when you vie the bottom half-two thirds there's an awful lot more colour in that sky.

Sorry to hear there is gloomy news or you.
This is an great shot, especially considering the fact on traveling at 45 mph.
Composition is spot on and the dark tones are appropriate and telling.
Great job.

A bit of supreme disinterest out the back but the rest look very cheerful. I recognise your two girls - family extras?