This one for me. I like her being more dominant n the frame.

Crikey, that's a high flying shark!

Ha, nice one. Someone with a fun and kindly disposition. Should be more of them

I go for this one overall. I like the more even contrast of the entire image and the shift in position I think makes for a more complementary background (including the car's sunburst)

That's the hardest choice you've presented in a while. I lean toward this one for her expression, but overall I prefer the other one.

Great composition and the long exposure did work well despite your tribulations.

its like that stage effect fog

Maybe not what you wanted but still a fine shot, I am curious if the several minute exposure would of blurred the selfish couple out, or if they were still enough to make use of in the composition?

And I like how the rock outcrops disappear progressively out into the sea.

Doesn't that behaviour give you the s*s. So selfish when blind freddie could see you were set up to photograph something. I'd have asked them nicely to move out and then consider stoning them .... but I can be a cranky old bugger. Anyways I like your composition very much and the LE wispiness you've got is very attractive. The foreground contrast is particularly nice too with the bare sand and weed strands on one side and the mainly rocky area on the right. The hint of pink in the sky is good too - glad you opted for colour.